This week we have been writing narratives. We have learnt that at the beginning of a narrative we need to introduce the characters and the setting. We also need to start our writing in an interesting
way. In the middle of the narrative there is always a problem. At the end of the narrative the problem is resolved and it could be a happy or sad ending. We hope you enjoy reading our narratives about the dogs and the bone.
Once
upon a time there was a girl called Pop. She had a dog. The dog had been very
good! The dog was called Poppy. The dog got the bone. Then the neighbour’s dog came
to the playground. Poppy was at the playground. He wanted to eat the yummy,
crunchy bone so, so much. The little dog thought that the big, big dog was
going to scratch him so the little dog gave the yummy, crunchy, delicious meaty
juicy bone to the big dog. The little fog felt so, so sad. “I like the bone,
now give it back to me” he said.
By Madison
One day there was a little dog called Lukey. He was a good dog. He got a bone. Another dog wanted the bone. They fought for the bone. The other dog got the bone. The little dog was disappointed.
By Riyan
One sunny day there was a girl. She gave a bone to her dog because he had been good. Along the way he met a dog. The big dog was sad because the little dog didn't share it. Then the big dog stole it. The little dog hollered, "The stole the bone". "Why did you do that?" Then the big dog gave the bone back. The little dog had a happy day because the big dog gave the bone back.
By Ayla
