We have been learning to write narratives. We have learnt that a narrative has a setting and a character or characters. There is always a problem in the middle and a solution at the end that might be happy or sad. We hope that you enjoy reading our narratives about the the girl and the apple tree.
One
day in the hot, hot sun a girl with a ribbon was climbing up an apple tree. She
tried to get the apple with one hand. She fell down on the apple. She ate the
apple.
By Daniel
One
sunny day there was a big, humongous apple tree. There was a girl called Riyan.
She climbed the apple tree and she fell down. Then someone helped Riyan. She
ate the apple.
By Cassandra
The
girl went to the big tree. The tree was an apple tree. The apple was juicy. The
apple was along way up. The apple was far away. The girl went to the tree. The
apple was up high. Then the little girl fell down. Then she ate the apple.
By Hunter
One
sunny day there was a little girl with beautiful golden hair. She climbed a
tree. She tried to get the apple. She fell down. She was all right. Then she
got to eat the delicious apple.
By Ayla
One
sunny day there was a beautiful girl with long golden hair. She was climbing up
the tree and she tried to reach to get the apple. Then she fell down. She was
all right. She ate the apple.
By Emma
One
sunny day Ezzie tried to climb up the apple tree. She tried to reach an apple
but the apple was up too far.
By Aurora
Once
there was a little girl. She climbed the apple tree and tried to get the apple.
She couldn’t reach the juicy apple. She fell down. She hurt her head. She got
to eat the juicy apple.
By Madison
One
good day there was a very tall apple tree. There was a little girl called
Hayley. She was climbing the apple tree. The apple was too high. She fell down.
She ate the apple.
By Le Tong
One
day there was a little girl. Her name was Jessica. She saw an apple tree. She
wanted to climb the apple tree. Then she climbed the apple tree and she fell
down and she ate the apple and she was o.k.
By Felix
One
day in a hot, hot country there was an apple tree and there was a girl called
Eve. Eve climbed the apple tree. She climbed and she was about to get it but
when she got it she fell down. She hurt her back but she got to eat the apple
so she was o.k.
By Luke
One
day there was a beautiful girl with long golden hair. Her name was Cassandra.
She saw a huge tree. It was an apple tree. The apple was too high. She went up
the tree and she fell down and broke her arms.
By Emiliano
One
sunny day there was girl. She was called Jessica. She climbed up the tree. Then
she fell down. Then the apple fell down. Jessica ate the delicious apple.
By Eve
Once
upon a time a little girl saw an apple tree. Her name was Eve. She climbed the
apple tree to get the apple. Eve reached up a bit more but she fell but she was
all right. She got to eat the apple
By Riyan
One
sunny day Jessica climbed up to the apple tree to get an apple. It was a tall
tree. She tried to reach the apple. She couldn’t reach the apple. She nearly
reached the apple but she fell down and the apple fell down. She ate the apple.
It was yummy.
By Angelina
One
sunny day there was a beautiful girl with long golden hair. She was climbing up
the tree and she tried to reach to get the apple. Then she fell down. She was
all right. She ate the apple.
By Emma
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